Is my new site doing ok?

davcheong · #1 (**permalink**) 10-12-2007, 07:36 PM

I just started my own nick domain name, which is davcheong :: Earning Online Guide. Please review my site, and hope to have some comments via here or on it.

Thanks in advance.

David Cheong.

davebarnes · #2 (**permalink**) 10-12-2007, 09:42 PM

Not much content.
Once I removed all the adverts, there were only 4 paragraphs.
You need a lot more ORIGINAL content.

Paul B · #3 (**permalink**) 10-14-2007, 06:54 PM

No.

Quote:

Contents are indeed cost a million if it is valued and unique word from your own mind and thoughts.

Deep joy but so oft terribold, hardly remarkibold. In fact horribold.

Stanley Unwin (comedian - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia)

**dharrison** · #4 (**permalink**) 10-14-2007, 07:06 PM

Hi Davecheong

I must be going senile or something: What is the purpose of your blog? Is it a sales pitch for making money or is it web design advice?

I am not sure I understand your direction. You may need to be a bit more clear before you can build a community around your blog.

HTH

info202 · #5 (**permalink**) 10-15-2007, 02:09 PM

I have to agree with the previous post... I have no idea what you are talking about and the fact that the grammar is awful makes it even more difficult to understand...

Dubbya · #6 (**permalink**) 10-15-2007, 05:16 PM

You need to stop using bablefish to translate your "contents". If at all possible, try to find someone to translate it for you.

As it stands, the entire site comes across as disjointed, unfocused and extremely unprofessional. You will not attract users if you can't get your point across quickly, clearly and concisely.

Were it not for the fact that you'd asked for a review, I'd immediately have clicked off your page.