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Old 10-11-2007, 07:31 AM
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Hi all,
I work at a on-line retail superstore,
and my work is to promote our website.

We had tried many ways to promote our website, such as submit URL at kinds of web directory and net bookmark, write press & article at many big sites, publish products at supply and demand platform, purchase some Google AdWords and so on.

But the result didn't reach our target.
So I come here ask for your opinion, any one have any suggestion about our site (such as product classification,the sequence of product, the layout of page, and other SEO suggestion)please feel free to tell me , i will vary appreciate about it .

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Old 10-11-2007, 11:11 AM
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The very first thing I would do is to add postal, physical, telephone, fax, email info to both the About Us page and and the Contact Us.
Without it, I don't trust you.

I can't determine what country you are targeting. IF the USA, then don't emphasize MP3 players as most people have no idea what they are as Apple iPods are 82% of the market.
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Old 10-11-2007, 12:29 PM
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Default Re: Please review, appreciate any suggestion.

Read the SEO stickies in this forum ... for example your title tag would indicate your targeted term for the site is 'reliable shop for MP3 players' but I kind of doubt that is a highly searched term.

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Old 10-11-2007, 06:14 PM
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Default Re: Please review, appreciate any suggestion.

I agree with the comments about physical location. Also, I would try advertising at dealnews.com/dealmac.com and maybe sponsoring a contest. Once I've seen an online retailer appear at dealnews for a few months, I trust them alot more than if I'd just seen a Google ad.
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Old 10-11-2007, 08:43 PM
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Your title tag has too may commas, and should be redefined to exactly want you want searched for. Your title tag is king in SEO get it right and it will serve you well. Use your mete Description to reach customers....use your title tag to reach the search engines. Also your title tag as at the bottom of your head tag...it should be near the top...the java script should be at the bottom.

Secondly you have no sustained text on your page. Not sustained texted equates as no relevant content, which equates to bad rankings.

Your Navigation is plentiful but confusing...a tight navigation is important.

I like your center column.....but find the information in the right column unnessary and confusingly distracting.

Your Header is also confusing
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Old 10-15-2007, 05:39 AM
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Thanks craigmn3, you suggestion really valuable for me.
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Old 10-31-2007, 03:54 AM
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The very first thing I would do is to add postal, physical, telephone, fax, email info to both the About Us page and and the Contact Us.
Without it, I don't trust you.

I can't determine what country you are targeting. IF the USA, then don't emphasize MP3 players as most people have no idea what they are as Apple iPods are 82% of the market.

Hi davabarner,

i really appreciate ur suggestion, your say the contact info, we used to add at the "contact us" & about us, but we deleted it to simplify. Now we meet the importace of that, and we'l add it soon.

Thanks for your advice again.
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Old 10-31-2007, 05:04 AM
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I'm usig 1024 screen resolution and i get too mouch blank space.

You can try to set an exact table size
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