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Old 10-06-2007, 03:29 AM
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Hi All

Please review my new site for hotel apartments


.:: WELCOME TO KAZI'S ICONIC HOTEL APARTMENTS ::.

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Old 10-06-2007, 06:23 AM
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The home page looks pretty but does not come near vaildating with 45 errors.

The two continuous moving ares are tiring and distracting when trying the read the text. I'd make the top one loop only once. The 'Featured Apartments' box stops on mouseover and the cursor changes but no links connect.

Bit of an odd name 'Kazi’s Iconic Hotel Apartments', but that's nothing to do with the website.

I'm not sure if having two different menus helps anything - but these are small criticisms on an otherwise stylish site...
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Old 10-06-2007, 07:17 AM
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Looks grand to me, a real work of art.
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Old 10-06-2007, 11:54 AM
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Looks pretty ... needs SEO ... I would suggest you read the stickys in the SEO forum ...

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Old 10-06-2007, 12:25 PM
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The two moving images/flash also bothered me. It is pretty distracting.
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Old 10-08-2007, 08:19 AM
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THANKS ALL for your valuable suggestions


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Old 10-08-2007, 07:07 PM
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Hi Al

thanks

Matheen
Hi I have just run our search engines websdpider through your website using it's diagnostic mode and I have sent a private message to you with the results that we have just found.

i hope this helps you out.

All the best
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Old 10-08-2007, 07:08 PM
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Excellent website. Only few things to sort out:
Business services
Parking
Transportation
Internet access
start paragraph with the same phrase, as bellow. Needs to be fixed.
Dubai sets itself apart with its range of resort facilities all set within 37 acres of perfectly-landscaped gardens where winding pathways lead past cascading waterfalls and tropical lagoons, towards the hotels spectacular pool area.
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Old 10-08-2007, 07:12 PM
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I'd like to see the column flash movie go to a static pic.
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Old 10-08-2007, 08:04 PM
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One of the animations has to go. I actually was getting motion sickness from both working at once. If that's changed then this is an attractive site.

Yes, you need to pay more attention to what people look for in hotel sites, as paul_foss pointed out, and do the things the others mentioned as far as what's needed for SEO. And yes, the code needs cleaning up.
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i agree that the right hand animation should be static but you could have arrows at top and bottom indicating the images can be scrolled through to be viewed IF THE USER WISHES. 2 animations running freely is v distracting and on slower browsers/for those without flash it will turn users away.

otherwise a great looking site though and lovely use of imagery
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Old 10-10-2007, 07:57 PM
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I agree that the image should be static as well.
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what about thre meta tags-you dont have much information
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