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Old 09-22-2007, 01:23 AM
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It took me 4 months of working 7 days a week, but I finally have updated all of my online stuff. As some of you know, I revamped my website, The Creative Cauldron The Creative Cauldron - Home and launched my blog The Creative's Corner The Creative’s Corner

A couple days ago I also launched 5 new websites:
The Writer's Resource Book at The Writer's Resource Book Of Science Fiction, Fantasy, Horror And Mythology

The Writer's Answer Book at The Writer's Answer Book

The Youngest Ninja at The Youngest Ninja Ebook

Ten Common Mistakes Found On Websites, and How To Fix Them at Ten Common Mistakes Found On Websites, And How To Fix Them

Freelancing May Be The Perfect Job For You at Freelancing May Be The Perfect Job For You

Take a look and let me know what you think. Now I get to start working on five more sites that I've had on the back burners. I'm hoping to have these other sites up in six months or so.

Have Fun,
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Old 09-23-2007, 07:24 PM
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Default Re: Finally Done... For The Moment

It reads like on huge online commercial. The background makes it a little hard to read. It looks a little dated.

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Old 09-24-2007, 12:30 AM
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Default Re: Finally Done... For The Moment

garish
very unpleasing aesthetics
not much content

start over
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Old 09-24-2007, 02:04 AM
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I only looked at one. 'the writers answer book'
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"Fill in the form below, click on the button, and you'll be taken to a page where you will see a list of some of the questions this ebook will answer, the book's outline and the special Bonuses."

This has to be a joke. . I can understand a reluctance to to not spell out the questions. But not giving out the questions ?

Having spent a lifetime selling, I would suggest you need to re think your sales pitch.
I am no web designer. I do not think you are either. .

My suggestion is either decide to make the 'Book' something every aspiring writer wants to read. . Or re-build your site, and place AdSense on it.

Jeff, the style of web page I just looked at is not for selling books. This style is used by people who claim to have made a million dollars selling books. The object of this style is to sell another site the same . . . That also does not sell books.

You need to re-think this page seriously.
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Old 09-24-2007, 01:08 PM
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Hmm... to me this smells a lot like spam
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Old 09-27-2007, 08:56 PM
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With "The Creative's Corner" you used the DEFAULT wordpress theme done in a dayglo green. That's not very creative, and it's hard on the eyes.

And that one is MUCH better than "The Creative Cauldron". I felt like I was back on Fortune City or Geocities back in the days of Web Infancy when looking at the Cauldron.
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