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Old 09-19-2007, 04:31 AM
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I just started SEO work some four months ago from scratch and although taken a lot on board would like some feedback from more experienced SEOs

I have a main website and a sister blog site, both would appreciate comment.

http://www.ourbulgarianworld.com

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Naturally all constructive criticism is welcome.
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Old 09-20-2007, 01:30 PM
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This Keyword Density Checker - Keyword Cloud says you are doing well with SEO.

This Search Engine Spider Simulator indicates to me that you have too much junk on the homepage. For example, the "you have not registered" at the top.
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Old 09-20-2007, 05:11 PM
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I think the home page overwhelms people. However. I do see that you have a whole crap load of links. A page rank of 4 and LOTS of pages indexed by Google.... 25,100 thats great. So far so good.

I have to ask though whats up with the picture on the home page... couldn't you guys get one that was sized correctly instead of one that is pixelated?

On the blog 124 pages indexed pretty good...

one thing I did notice about your main site though is errors were showing up... which made me want to see if it was validated at w3c.org just as I thought it was not. They show 773 errors.

heres the link [Invalid] Markup Validation of http://www.ourbulgarianworld.com/ - W3C Markup Validator
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Old 09-23-2007, 09:55 PM
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ourbulgarianworld… Internet explorer couldn’t display the web page,… I tried refresh and re-clicking several times.?.

I was able to view Bulgarian Slivatree so I will offer my opinion on this one.

As far as SEO,… there isn’t or I missed the meta tags for DESCRIPTION and KEYWORDS. Also the title could have a little more explanation/description/enticement.

The css could be in an external style sheet to slim the code.

The green background was way too bright for me and the white text on the dark green header was difficult to read.

On a positive note, it reads like you are enjoying your time there, however I would reccommend using a spell checker.
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Old 09-24-2007, 02:57 AM
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Thank you for your feedback and comments, something to get my teeth into right now and continue the learning curve which steepens over time.

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Old 09-24-2007, 04:59 AM
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Hi Clicken,

Thank you for your comments.

I don't know why your internet explorer doesn't display Our Bulgarian World it does from my end! Mozilla Firefox is another option if you care to take time.

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Martin
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