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Old 07-04-2007, 06:15 AM
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Default Please review www.personalchef.com

Hi there,

I dont know if I have posted this site before.. but I worked hard on this site... so please give me your comments so I can improve it more.

The site URL is American Personal & Private Chef Institute & Association - Professional Personal Chef Training

Waiting for your feedback.

Thanks!!!!!!!
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Default Re: Please review www.personalchef.com

I wouldn't expect any substantive feedback without a task list. For example, set up a dummy account. Next set tasks like...

"Find out when the [dummy subscriber name] membership is going to expire."

What are the top five things users do on the site? Getting opinions on the logo and color scheme from a forum post isn't going to tell you this. You want a dummy account so evaluators can, for example, put a purchase into the shopping basket and go through the checkout procedure.

Having people take a quick peek isn't going to reveal much on a site with any depth.
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Old 07-05-2007, 05:51 PM
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Default Re: Please review www.personalchef.com

I would ditch the obvious foray into driving traffic to the other sites you have listed up at the very top and keep things directly related to the theme.

Web design, shopping malls, and chefs have little in common nor are they relevant to each other.

Your users and the search engines will question this.

Keep your garden walls closed...do not send people off to other sites, or if you must make it as inconspicuous as possible.

Otherwise you have an excellent site and job well done.
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Old 07-06-2007, 11:50 AM
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Default Re: Please review www.personalchef.com

Thanks for your comments.. and I am not sending any one to any third party sites.. every website linked on this ...is ...APPCA's own site.. like personalchefmall.com personalchefhosting.com personalchefsearch.com personalcheftraining.com personalchefsummit.com personalchefmedia.com personalchefnews.com

all part of the personal chef portal...that I built and now maintain it
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Default Re: Please review www.personalchef.com

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and I am not sending any one to any third party sites.. every website linked on this ...is ...APPCA's own site..

all part of the personal chef portal...that I built and now maintain it
Doesn't really matter.
Is it really necessary to link to those sites on every page?
In addition, Just clutters up the site, IMO
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Default Re: Please review www.personalchef.com

Nice site, everything flows together well. As for the comments on the other site links, it does contribute to clutter, maybe combine them in a drop-down with your menu on the left? Initial impression is information overload, but what you have does work.
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Old 07-13-2007, 06:48 PM
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Default Re: Please review www.personalchef.com

I like it alot, except I can't determine a clear purpose for the site upon arrival. Its a bit confusing. I mean I understand that it is an assoc. but my thought is... I dont' know where to go first...

I do have two comments:

I would save the address for a "contact us" page.

Also the "last updated" info...Who's benefitting from seeing that information? I haven't seen that on a page since like '97.

Keep up the good work.
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Flash animations are good.
Header is a kind of empty.
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Old 07-31-2007, 05:56 PM
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header is kind of empty ?? like how !?!?
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