Need a Site Review and Suggestions

cutiger95 · #1 (**permalink**) 06-27-2007, 08:35 PM

Need someone to review my site and let me know what I should change if anything to turn visitors to sales.

Just suggestions if you have a moment.

The Article Group - Front Page

I think it looks pretty clean and the verbage is good, but need professional assistance with it if you may.

bj · #2 (**permalink**) 06-27-2007, 08:57 PM

"The Article Group - Front Page" is a very weak title from both an SEO standpoint and the standpoint of what you say you can do, since it doesn't show off your copywriting skills at all. You should use that to tell people exactly what you do and show them how you do it.

Re the design, visually it's okay, but you sure can lighten up on the code. Put the css in its own file so it can be cached for the whole site, which will save time and bandwidth, both on load and on editing later on. And the table code bloats your html quite a bit. You also have some validation errors that should be addressed, especially the meta errors, since they might affect how (or even IF) the site is spidered.

You're a site that is offering "first quality ghostwritten articles" so you better check the grammar and usage on your front page and correct errors such as this, "Our authors are trained to both sale and entertain your readers" and this, "grab a readers attention" and maybe do a better job on your own copywriting overall. By the way, it's spelled "verbiage", and it doesn't mean what you think it means.

cutiger95 · #3 (**permalink**) 06-27-2007, 10:10 PM

Thank you very much and I will modify the text immediately. Articles are my specialty not short information shots and it can get me into a lot of trouble on occassion.

Again thanks and I will correct these immediately.

davebarnes · #4 (**permalink**) 06-27-2007, 11:57 PM

Contact lacks: phone, postal, physical data.

cutiger95 · #5 (**permalink**) 06-28-2007, 10:39 PM

Thanks I will add those tonight as well.