Please review this site.

erbbraun1029 · #1 (**permalink**) 06-21-2007, 04:21 PM

Please review my site.

Thank you so much.

Courtship Stories

Ellen

davebarnes · #2 (**permalink**) 06-21-2007, 05:10 PM

Very nice.
Perfect imagery for the service.

You should have a copyright notice on the homepage.

Very cute contact us info.

I would spend some time on simple SEO techniques.

Shift4SMS · #3 (**permalink**) 06-21-2007, 07:08 PM

The flash did not display for me using my default browser - Firefox 2.0.0.4. IE worked fine.

For some reason, Firefox does this with many flash sites. Using the latest flash detection code on the Adobe site seems to correct the issue - at least with the sites I deal with.

From what I saw using IE, site looks great.

paul_foss · #4 (**permalink**) 06-21-2007, 07:43 PM

Just one thing, the instructions on the Flash is not clear. Maybe you should say "Click once and then drag ....

erbbraun1029 · #5 (**permalink**) 06-21-2007, 08:06 PM

Thanks I'm submitting your suggestions as we speak to Mosaic Design Group, my designer.

lanthus · #6 (**permalink**) 06-23-2007, 10:35 PM

I thought ... I was expecting ... too many pictures ...

Your website is basically a service-focus-site, not an information-spread-site ...

So,--

1. Add some music ... Add the voice (additional to printed text) per the browser language (window.navigator/window.clientInformation Object, SEE REF);

2. If there's continuity between pictures, Draw-zoom (to) it ... not overt but from the heart.

Ray.

REF: clientInformation Object (window) "clientInformation"
REF: browserLanguage Property (clientInformation, navigator) "browserLanguage"
REF: userLanguage Property (clientInformation, navigator) "userLanguage"
REF: navigator Object (window) "navigator"

corporateface · #7 (**permalink**) 06-25-2007, 01:21 PM

The banner area on top with the ebay etc... are pixelated and IMO should be moved to a different place.

corporateface · #8 (**permalink**) 06-25-2007, 01:37 PM

NEVERMIND :O)

The WPW newsletter had the "Featured Site Review" linked to the wrong post.
Sorry, for the information that made no sense at all to you

)

Keith

erbbraun1029 · #9 (**permalink**) 06-25-2007, 09:21 PM

Yeah, flipped me out. Ebay??

Dave Barnes thanks for the private correspondence. I learned a lot!!

Ellen