I am slightly new to to the whole web deisgn thing, I am usually designing other types of media for businesses. However this is my first attempt, and I used a web builder as I am new to html as well.

Can anybody constructively criticize the cripe out of it for me?

*thanks*

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Dawn M. Blain
Director of Marketing
Hodges and Irvine Incorporated
http://www.hodgesandirvine.com

Well for a firs site it is very tidy and professional looking.

My main concern was it looked too grey and sterile. I feel like the "style'doesn't sell the product as best it possibly can.

I had the thought of a photo of someone at a hotel reception using one of the "booking books" or somethimg to give it more appeal.

Nice, tidy, but just lacking that "extra" quality.

Hope it helps,
Tania

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The header looks plain nothing there. I would add a picture of some sort to the header and put your logo in the header.

Other then that nice looking site.

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