Hi

I am back ::grinz::

ok...this is not my style..but it was client's wish so..check out this site

The Happy Cooker - A Personal Chef Service by Chef Lilly McGuire and let me know what do you think

sorry guys..but do expect around 4-5 sites from me...in a month...hope you dont get tired of me

cheers!! and thank you in advance for all your comments and feedback

Love ya' all (especially the ladies ::grinz:

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Mamoon,

1. " Powerd by"? You need to check spelling. I did not look for other misspellings, just happened to notice this one.

2. Get rid of the colored bar of diamonds on the left ! Ugy. Distracting.

3. Need to get rid of the unused vertical space at the top. Get more "above the fold".

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Hi Mamoon,
This might be outside of your brief, but the copy on the website is rather naff.

The very first sentence is too long, and possibly even might even alienate the very audience you're trying to reach!

I'd advise your client to hire a copywrighter, or at very least have a good trawl through the archives over at copyblogger: Copywriting tips for online marketing success from Copyblogger

HTH!
- rich

I don't like the logo.

The small logo over the faded logo is distracting.

I think the left menu is too wide.

The first sentence under the Standard Weekly Dinner... needs to be reworked.

I usually really like your sites. As you stated, this client seemed to go in a different direction than you would have, maybe you can steer them back a little.

Chris Duncan

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I agree with all of Dave’s comments completely. I also think some copy writing help is also in order. Your image on the top right isn’t clear. Kinda blurry on my eyes. I also would look into creating more “call to action” The site doesn’t “tell” me to do anything. Get the customers to write that email or pick up the phone. Give them a reason! Just my 2-cents!

I missed this in my last post. The FAQ button didn’t seem to work for me. Don’t think its linked up but I didn’t look at the code or anything.

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Mamoon

Hope I'm not coming in too late, but thought my observation might be important. Viewing in Opera 9.2, the Contact menu button almost completely obscures the button above it (I cannot see what this might be called). What I see is Testinmonials, a tiny bit of another button and the Contact button

Regards, BigD