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Armaddeus · #1 (**permalink**) 06-04-2007, 07:00 PM

Hi Everyone - would appreciate constructive critism of the DIY site - Invisible Contribution - Visible Success.

Thanks

Peter
MD

davebarnes · #2 (**permalink**) 06-04-2007, 11:36 PM

1. (I know I sound like a broken record) You need physical, postal, telephone info on the Contact Us page. Why would I ever do business with someone who won't provide that info? Don't answer. It was a rhetorical question.

2. Even worse. I arrived at your home and have no clue as to what you do or how you can help me.

3. Unless your target audience is under 25 years of age, the body font is too small.

4. The stock photos look cheap. Get better ones.

Clicken · #3 (**permalink**) 06-06-2007, 01:38 AM

Why is there is a shopping cart and tracking option? I didn't see anything to put in a cart or to keep track of.

Also, the grey font color for content text is too light, it is hard to read.

SurfYourName · #4 (**permalink**) 06-06-2007, 09:01 AM

Wow this site is DRY. Boring, small font, too much text. Corporate Business Strategies is the only thing on the page that caught my eye but I don’t know what it means. Is this just an information site or does is it supposed to provide a purpose? I am not as big on the Physical address, phone number, etc that Dave is, but I still agree; The more information you can give your customer, the more creditable you become. The stock photos look just like stock photos. Get more creative, the site just bored me. Gave me NO reason to read the large amounts of copy.

Its so difficult to give criticism without sounding rude. FYI—not being rude!

Erik Bledsoe
SurfYourName.com
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