Hi,

Pls review my site.

thanks.

It would help if we could see it. Please repost it - Thanks David

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Ohidur,

I hope you are not asking us to review http://bdwebservice.com as it is not "ready for prime time".

I won't do business with someone who has a gmail address.

,dave

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Hi,
I ask for just review - pls review my site. Feel free to suggest anything.



Thanks
Ohid

its pretty darn ugly. I clicked off it so fast I don't even know what its about, (and didn't really care)

I have always maintained the 2 second rule, get your viewer in 2 seconds or lose them, I don't think I even waited for it to load completely, and sad to say I assume that's probably how 80% of your viewers are.

Eye candy gets em and the meat keeps em!

Make me want to find out what your site is about. or at least get me to read the first page to deterimine if it's worthy of more investigation.

later

Nick

Would someone actually work with this company after seeing their site? Is this for real?

Erik Bledsoe
www.SurfYourName.com

Hi
Nothing to suggest . It,s good looking.

Hi
I checked ur site . Nothing to change.
thnx.

I suggest...

- Use a contact form or an email address with the domain of the site, not a gmail address.

- The logo needs to be re-done in Photoshop if possible. Also, I suggest not using so many colors in the logo, tagline and background.

- The top header in general is boring. It needs to include information as to why the site is something visitors should be interested in.

- If you are targeting U.S. customers ... I'm not a fan of your slogan, "Your Reliable Partner". The slogan, in my opinion should tell me what the site does. It is too generic.

- You should not have a "latest news" header without news. I assume you will soon.

- The front page has too much text. Your bullet points for the two services are fine, but I would put the sections on Information, Packages and FAQ on seperate pages. For the Packages page prominent links should be under each section.

- Add links to a list of the directories submitted to for each price point. People want to know what they are paying for.

- The site has a very small business look ... which is fine ... but in order to gain confidence of the potential customer to buy your services I suggest promoting yourself as an expert in directory submissions. Put your name and picture out there and make people feel that they will get what they are paying for.


Hope that helps....

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