Hi there,

I created this Farm Shop

Its still a very new venture but all comments greatly appreciated.

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It made me lick my lips :-)

1. Change your font to sans-serif and it will be much easier to read.

2. I don't see a "buy" button.

3. I would use your .co.uk address as you are clearly targeting only the UK market.

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My biggest beef with your site (sorry about the pun) is that I have to scroll down to read anything of interest.

If you can move the meat up into the first screen, that would remove the bones from your site and make it more edible. (Ok, I couldn't resist it...the site is great so how can I not use the right nomenclature>)

You have a mix of fonts. Standardize them to make it more readable, and change the colors to match the topic. Light green is not only hard to read but it doesn't complement your product does it? How about using a deep brown color instead, like this?
"Your Shopping Cart Contents"

I would venture that an Indian company made it for you judging by some of the 'English'.

"Please use the below options to add or delete products to your shopping cart." Very Indian English.

How about ....options below....

Overall, I think you have a great site, but it just needs some tightening up. Good luck!

PS I'd buy your products but I live in Thailand. Too far to ship and your prices are not what we are used to here.

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Marc Holt
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Beautiful photo of the beef.

You might want to do a grammar check on the site.
...you will find anywhere. (removed the:)
... and if you don't (added ' to don't)

"We believe our beef is second to none". Instead of the next sentence about putting doubt in people's mind, say it's 100% satisfaction guaranteed.

Can you educate us on what makes this beef special and how your farm is different than the pack? Do you have photos of the farm? History of the farm and how it started? The more of an emotional appeal you make to the consumer, the more we want to buy from you.

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It's ok I guess.

Could be better.

Variation of fonts is confusing.

Agree with Marc - Does look a bit like the English was written by an Indian.

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