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Old 05-10-2007, 12:20 PM
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Default Review: www.babymetv.com

Hi All,
This site provides great parenting advice and has professional videos about babies, parenting, toddlers, breastfeeding, and many other topics. Could you please give me a review on what you think about the sites design and things.

The url is: http://www.babymetv.com

Thanks in advance!
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Old 05-11-2007, 03:22 AM
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Good looking site for the most part... however you asked for a review... first thing I would do is put all of this javascript into an external file called from the index :
Code:
<script>
  function fade(id, color1, color2){
    //Fat.fade_element(id, 10, 1000, color1, color2);
  }
</script>
<script language="JavaScript" type="text/javascript">
<!--
// -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
// Globals
// Major version of Flash required
var requiredMajorVersion = 8;
// Minor version of Flash required
var requiredMinorVersion = 0;
// Minor version of Flash required
var requiredRevision = 0;
// the version of javascript supported
var jsVersion = 1.0;
// -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
// -->
</script>
<script language="VBScript" type="text/vbscript">
<!-- // Visual basic helper required to detect Flash Player ActiveX control version information
Function VBGetSwfVer(i)
  on error resume next
  Dim swControl, swVersion
  swVersion = 0

  set swControl = CreateObject("ShockwaveFlash.ShockwaveFlash." + CStr(i))
  if (IsObject(swControl)) then
    swVersion = swControl.GetVariable("$version")
  end if
  VBGetSwfVer = swVersion
End Function
// -->
</script>
<script language="JavaScript1.1" type="text/javascript">
<!-- // Detect Client Browser type
var isIE  = (navigator.appVersion.indexOf("MSIE") != -1) ? true : false;
var isWin = (navigator.appVersion.toLowerCase().indexOf("win") != -1) ? true : false;
var isOpera = (navigator.userAgent.indexOf("Opera") != -1) ? true : false;
jsVersion = 1.1;
// JavaScript helper required to detect Flash Player PlugIn version information
function JSGetSwfVer(i){
   // NS/Opera version >= 3 check for Flash plugin in plugin array
   if (navigator.plugins != null && navigator.plugins.length > 0) {
      if (navigator.plugins["Shockwave Flash 2.0"] || navigator.plugins["Shockwave Flash"]) {
         var swVer2 = navigator.plugins["Shockwave Flash 2.0"] ? " 2.0" : "";
            var flashDescription = navigator.plugins["Shockwave Flash" + swVer2].description;
         descArray = flashDescription.split(" ");
         tempArrayMajor = descArray[2].split(".");
         versionMajor = tempArrayMajor[0];
         versionMinor = tempArrayMajor[1];
         if ( descArray[3] != "" ) {
            tempArrayMinor = descArray[3].split("r");
         } else {
            tempArrayMinor = descArray[4].split("r");
         }
            versionRevision = tempArrayMinor[1] > 0 ? tempArrayMinor[1] : 0;
            flashVer = versionMajor + "." + versionMinor + "." + versionRevision;
         } else {
         flashVer = -1;
      }
   }
   // MSN/WebTV 2.6 supports Flash 4
   else if (navigator.userAgent.toLowerCase().indexOf("webtv/2.6") != -1) flashVer = 4;
   // WebTV 2.5 supports Flash 3
   else if (navigator.userAgent.toLowerCase().indexOf("webtv/2.5") != -1) flashVer = 3;
   // older WebTV supports Flash 2
   else if (navigator.userAgent.toLowerCase().indexOf("webtv") != -1) flashVer = 2;
   // Can't detect in all other cases
   else {

      flashVer = -1;
   }
   return flashVer;
}
// When called with reqMajorVer, reqMinorVer, reqRevision returns true if that version or greater is available
function DetectFlashVer(reqMajorVer, reqMinorVer, reqRevision)
{
   reqVer = parseFloat(reqMajorVer + "." + reqRevision);
      // loop backwards through the versions until we find the newest version
   for (i=25;i>0;i--) {
      if (isIE && isWin && !isOpera) {
         versionStr = VBGetSwfVer(i);
      } else {
         versionStr = JSGetSwfVer(i);
      }
      if (versionStr == -1 ) {
         return false;
      } else if (versionStr != 0) {
         if(isIE && isWin && !isOpera) {
            tempArray         = versionStr.split(" ");
            tempString        = tempArray[1];
            versionArray      = tempString .split(",");
         } else {
            versionArray      = versionStr.split(".");
         }
         versionMajor      = versionArray[0];
         versionMinor      = versionArray[1];
         versionRevision   = versionArray[2];

         versionString     = versionMajor + "." + versionRevision;   // 7.0r24 == 7.24
         versionNum        = parseFloat(versionString);
         // is the major.revision >= requested major.revision AND the minor version >= requested minor
         if ( (versionMajor > reqMajorVer) && (versionNum >= reqVer) ) {
            return true;
         } else {
            return ((versionNum >= reqVer && versionMinor >= reqMinorVer) ? true : false );
         }
      }
   }
}
// -->

</script>
Then... I'd alter the title tag, put in a keyword and description tags and put a quick line at the very end that says bla bla bla... hyper link (keyword) to the likes of

©babymetv.com A real baby advice website.

Or whatever your trying to rank for at the very end ;)

hope that helps ;)

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Old 05-11-2007, 04:42 AM
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This post has been reported as being spam - personally I cannot see it. No doubt other Mods will pop in too.
I'll pm the reporter and ask for their reasons.
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Old 05-11-2007, 07:53 AM
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great design, love the use of colours
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Old 05-14-2007, 09:47 AM
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I like the layout and color choices. You have a right column on the interior pages, which are mostly empty. You could utilize that area more. How are you doing with the search engines?

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