Please, visit www.okaforworld.com

It was hard for me to build this site from scrash for my business.

I knew nothing about web design or anything but had to copy from so many sites and put them together as mine.

Tell me what you think should be amended?

Hi there,

I think your efforts are comendable but you need to do some fine tuning if you really want to sell things from your site.

In honestly one of the fundamental things I felt lasking was structure and style. The pages looked clutered which makes it hard for your visitor to think cleraly.

I would try come up with a colour scheme that is less intrusive. The grey text was hard for me to read on the blue, but as much as anything I think working on mood colours and developing a style that really suits what you are selling would help.

Check out www.w3schools.com for some tutorials on actually writing web pages. When you kow a bit more technical stuff it is much easier to get your pages to look the way you want them to.

Also if you can find it, check out a book called "The Non-Designers Design Book" by Robin Williams. I thnk she wrote a web design one as well as the one above is for print, but a lot of the basic theory is relevant to both print and web design...

Good luck
Tania

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