There is some attempt at saying what you do, which is not bad. Lose the "download Netscape, IE"
Inside the bullet points and photos they lead to are less than informative. I see wires going into a breaker box -- which is closed. This tells me almost nothing about 1) quality of workmanship. 2) How satisfied the customer was. 3) What the big greyish looking "locker" thingy is (...if I don't know what a breaker box is).
Say you are calleed in to bring something up to code. You snap a "before" picture. You put it on the site with a caption "Can your electrician spot the five code violations in this picture?" You snap a detailed "after" picture. Take it into some (any) graphic program. Draw circles around repairs. Then add this to the site explaining each, and what they would cost if inspectors had found them before you did.
This is not IT head stuff. It isn't even fancy writing. It is probably not far off from the way you talk up the business when face-to-face with potential employers. Don't list credentials, explain why credentials matter. (This is a source of opportunity to explain what sets you apart)
The front page looks different from interior pages, which look different from photo galleries. Unify the site around a single layout.
The site needs a tagline or significant business proposition (the 'elevator pitch.') It needs content which puts the bullet points in some context for the reader (You do X. This does not, in any way, give me the context to decide anything.) The site might need a testimonial or two. The front page can be eliminated by integrating it as a unifying theme for the rest of the layout. Photos should either be changed to infographics, or closeups of detail need to be highlighted and captioned with explanations.
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