Hi,

I thought i'd have a go at posting a reply for you. I really like the design of the site (especially the colour scheme).

The 'about us' page could do with more spacing between the paragraphs.

I would change 'softwares' to 'software'

Also, on the homepage, I think there needs to be more of a build up before you present the products. It's not an industry i'm familiar with but I think it could be written more interestingly. You mention the features of the products quite often but not really the benefits.

This might help: http://www.thepersontosee.com/tpts/2...es_tell_b.html

Gary :-)

Just a quick look...

Overall, I like the site. It feels tightly packaged (not loose and sprawly). It has a consitent design theme.

The image of the lady in the header (arms crossed, smiling) isn't completely clear. She's kind of blurry and almost scary. Her eyes are black (to me, in a bad way). I can't completely put my finger on it but that image disturbs me. Ha, maybe it's just something from my childhood? Still, the jpeg could certainly use sharpening.

On the "Contact" page, the email address is not hot. That's an easy fix (so I wouldn't have to copy&paste it into my email program). It kind of runs together also. Why not break it out more- address separated from phone/fax numbers separated from *clickable* email address. A form option there wouldn't hurt either (but keep the email address for people who don't like forms).

Here's something that might not be so easy to fix. When I click on the buy buttons I am redirected to another url. This makes me think I'm on an affiliate site... which makes me think I should dig deeper for the "authority" site. Now, not everyone is like me but I can't be that unique. If there is a way to capture sales on this url without forcing customers to leave that would increase your authority points.

OK, one more thing. I'd like to see more content (examples, detailed and personal descriptions, and testimonials). It may be early yet in the process, but a good testimonial or two would be golden!

I agree with both of the above suggestions as well.

Good luck with this project!

Nathan

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Many of your graphics aren't clear.
I would guess that you are using a sub-standard graphics editor (just guessing)

You need to create your graphics in photoshop or gimp (something like that).

I would avoid copying and pasting graphics into your web editor. It is always better to use the graphics software to save the graphics first.

I hope this makes sense

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Nice design.

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