I want your advice

ronny_fg · #1 (**permalink**) 03-09-2007, 09:56 AM

Hi All,

I've a very new site http://www.mobilegolive.com/. This site is on mobile marketing and services. Please go through the above link and let me know your valuable comments and advice.

Waiting for your reply.

Thanks in advance.

ronny.

Advice

davebarnes · #2 (**permalink**) 03-09-2007, 10:30 AM

I don't like the ragged edges on the images.

Your site appears to be targeted at business people, yet it looks like (the ragged edges) it is targeted to consumers.

I would try a version without ragged edges and ask some business people in Singapore what they think.

ronny_fg · #3 (**permalink**) 03-10-2007, 08:52 AM

Thanks a lot for visiting my site and posting your comments.

tomlom · #4 (**permalink**) 03-12-2007, 08:07 PM

The copy

Quote:

Mobile Go Live is a key to deliver a sustainable, practical solution to reach the maximum number of handsets with a scanable barcode, and to deliver the ultimate in convenience and easy-to-use. The customers will able to create multiple campaign targets at different customers

has numerous grammatical and spelling errors

spades · #5 (**permalink**) 03-13-2007, 06:57 PM

I think the site looks dated. It looks a lot like sites I saw 5 years ago, ripple effects and all. I think it could use a more updated look and feel.

...spades...

hbonline · #6 (**permalink**) 03-17-2007, 12:37 AM

as Jerry Seinfeld would say looks like a template site "Not that there is anything wrong with that"

But if you use a template site spruce it up a bit.

Nick