We would be honored if this group would provide us with their unbridled opinion of our new site: http://www.magnumsun.com

Thank you,

Steve

Steve (aka Jeff Spangler),

1. Go through your website and change all typewriter quotes to typographic quotes. It will imporve the readability.

2. I think you should replace the static image on the homepage with a Flash movie.

3. Change this on homepage
<title>Magnum Sun - Commercial Tanning Beds</title>
to
<title>Commercial Tanning Beds - Magnum Sun</title>
It will be better when it shows in the organic search engine results.

4. Every page should have UNIQUE title, description and keyword tags, not the same tag on every page.

5. These beds weight how much and I only get delivery to the curb! Get real.

6. Get rid of the shadows on the Freedom... logo. Looks tacky.

,dave

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on http://www.magnumsun.com/Advantage.cfm, move the 3 buttons ('series') to the top of the page so it catches my attention quicker.

I'm still working on some of the suggested changes. The only couple I can't make are switching the picture on the front page to flash (funds), and removing the shadow from the financial logo (logo for partner company, won't let us make them a better version).

The other changes I am getting put in.

Thanks again for the great advice.

Tag Analysis
Item Status Length Comments
Title tag Found 6 word(s) / 36 char. Good
Description meta tag Found 24 word(s) / 151 char. Good
Keywords meta tag Found 24 word(s) / 194 char. Good
Number of Possible Spelling Errors: 1
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