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Originally Posted by sbandi
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Yes, you did change the look and feel alright. Very pretty indeed. The title tag is excellent for the site too. Got lots more text in there as well. I think that now what you need to do is to fix all those more than 100 coding errors and your description which has too many characters and very little relativity to the text on the page and keyword tag which has about the same problems as the description tag.
I see you are using the Tm registered after your name. Have you actually registered that with the U.S. Govt. trademark office? I seriously doubt that you have and if you have not then I would recommend that you remove the Tm from the site for legal reasons.
Might look cute but could lead to legal problems someday in the future.
I'm wondering who you think is likely to search for anything using the term "pretty sleek" or any of it's combinations? You have many other keywords in there which aren't even on your page but which you think
you would like people to search for and find your page.
Search engines are not the least bit interested in what keywords you would like your page known for. All they care about is what is actually on your page and how relevant your page is to the wording of the searcher's query. They will decide that, not you. All you can do is choose your keywords, make sure they are used as many times as is possible without making your site cheesy. Use any keyword too many times and you may get penalized and fall lower in the listings.
Fail to use it enough and lose that way too.
And have you figured out how your page is going to compete with Endgadget? If you don't know about them then I'd suggest you get very familiar with them and their RSS feeds. They have been doing what you are attempting to do for a long time now and their reviews are famous and well done.
I like that Bluetooth rear view mirror but I didn't see how much audio power it puts out. Most of those gadgets are way underpowered and usually fail to work well. More and more people are using the bluetoothl ear pieces now. Too bad it isn't a requirement for all cell phones. No wires to get all tangled up in and they work well. I have two or three of them and I also have other bluetooth devices. I have a device which is very similiar to the one on your website but never use it for the simple reason that bluetooth can only use one device at a time so that would mean that when I get into my vehicle I would have to shut off the earpiece and then bond to the one in the vehicle which isn't anywhere near as functional as the earpiece is. Lots of time wasted in switching devices that could be better used getting where I want to go.
Might be a bit useful on long trips of 8 hours or more because battery power on the earpiece degenerates rapidly or simply don't exist after that lenght of time. That's just one reason why multiple devices are needed. One can be charging while the other is in use or you can use one until it is dead and switch to the next one then charge both at the end of a long day.
Nice looking website but needs lots of work yet.
How about those other pages on the site? I'll bet they all need the same kind of reworking too.
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