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Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

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Old 12-04-2006, 02:22 PM
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Default please review my site

Its a free instant messaging site for communities
so check it out:
http://www.snooggie.com
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Old 12-04-2006, 10:04 PM
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Default Two Things Bug Me

First, as a graphic artist, I hate graphics that aren't anti-aliased. If you anti-alias 'Snoogie' your home page would look very clean.

I make mistakes too but I hate poor grammar. Fix this; 'Each person, which is connected to your community chat will appear in the "currently online chatters list" just click on the person you wish to chat with and start chatting (couldn't be any simpler then this).

The 'comma' and 'which is' are incorrect, lose them. Put a . after ". . . chatters list". and make Just the start of a new sentence. It's than, not 'then'

There are some other grammatical errors elsewhere. Have someone go over it with a fine tooth comb. Don't be a putz, there are far too many of them on the web already.

I may even join Snoogie myself, it looks interesting. Good Luck!
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