Hi,
nervously, I ask if you could kindly view my site offer any constructive advice & criticism. This is in regard to layout, colours, content, SEO or anything!

www.Tropical-Sunrise.com

Thank you very much indeed.

Regards

John

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This article would make a readable web page, with large type, proper line spacing, and professional layout

The site is too wide, type is small, visual flow is poor so there is little for the reader to focus on. It looks like a big mass of small text. You haven't made the text easy to read or scan for information.

The site could use a little more readable, more professional layout. Subheads which address key sales points allow readers to scan.

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Hi Dcrux,

thanks for the comments. I take your point about focus and the examples you gave. I shall look a breaking it up a bit. I am a bit puzzled about text sizing, as on both IE and FFox it appears roughly the same as on the two samples you gave. On my machine and others I have seen my site on, the text appears larger than the text in these postings.

I will definitely add some sub heads.

I appreciate the feedback. If anyone else has any comments, I am all ears!

Cheers

John

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Mobile Spray Tanning in Oxfordshire and Buckinghamshire