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Old 11-11-2006, 04:57 AM
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hi fellow webproworldians,

please review the listed site

Eternity treasure trove - find your treasure here

Any comments are welcome.
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Old 11-11-2006, 09:35 AM
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Sorry, I looked but your Site didn't show!
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Old 11-11-2006, 10:59 AM
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giving correct url eventhough there isn't much out there..

Eternity treasure trove - find your treasure here
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Old 11-11-2006, 11:17 AM
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Try to improve the color combination. It doesn't invite browser to read more. I personally find it inconvenient to read. If you want to keep your text color, try changing the background color. It will add if you'll have a logo or if you prefer not to put any logo there, make your page header text larger and add some space in between your header and the body. Your tags also in the forum section, it's very hard to read. You need to work on your spacing and color combi.
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Old 11-11-2006, 11:18 AM
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Needs greater contrast between background (white) and text (gray).

The blue leaves look silly to me.

Good navigation.

Oh my god. I clicked on the forum button and wound up at an awful site full of advertisements and not looking as if it was part of Eternity.
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Old 11-11-2006, 11:23 AM
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Oh my god. I clicked on the forum button and wound up at an awful site full of advertisements and not looking as if it was part of Eternity.
i do agree. i wondered if it was really meant for forum.
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Old 11-11-2006, 11:30 AM
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Thank you for your comments and time.

The site was created using the site wizard provided by the hosting company. So, there are limitations to changes which can be done. But your comments definitely help and will see what can be done.

Regarding the forum, this is a free service provided by the hosting company. so, either i will have live with the advertisements or remove those services from there...Removing the forum, for time being, might be a better idea if it doesn't seem to add much value to the browser?
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Old 11-13-2006, 06:20 PM
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I would change hosting companies.

The site does not tell me anything about what it is your doing.

The name sounds like a dating site.

The design looks like a garden site.

The text is hard to read, it's to light.

You welcome me two times and I have to click on some links to find out what exactly your doing.

No telephone numbers.

You have 3 seconds to keep in on your site, I read some text and clicked on some links but still do not understand what the site is about.
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Old 11-14-2006, 09:35 AM
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Thanks for the comments, Janeth and for taking the effort to go through the whole site.
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Old 11-14-2006, 10:00 PM
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I have to echo the comment about contrast it was the first thing that struck me

Second while I get the premise of what you do a wise man once said a picture is worth a thousand words.
Show me something, Grab my attention and make me comfy....

good work so far
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Old 11-15-2006, 10:02 PM
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Thanks for all those suggestions.. Trying to get some content out there before doing any major changes.
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