English Grammer

Kinley · #1 (**permalink**) 10-16-2006, 07:43 AM

Hi,

please help me correct any english mistakes at my website:
http://www.singlepagemarketing.com

Besides that, what do you think in general?

Thanks!

davebarnes · #2 (**permalink**) 10-16-2006, 10:56 AM

1. The red color for your H2s is too pink. Try #CC0033.

2. Contact info is basically non-existent. Where is the postal address and the telephone number?

3. Your site looks slightly shifty. I would be very nervous.

,dave

janeth · #3 (**permalink**) 10-16-2006, 12:57 PM

I like the colors and look of the site but agree about their needing to be some contact information.

But I really don't understand what the site is about nor do I have a desire to stay on the site to figure it out.

Not sure if anyone else has the same problem but if they do then those are big design flaws.

Kinley · #4 (**permalink**) 10-16-2006, 01:12 PM

Hi,

What can I do in your opinion to fix this?
Does everyone feels like that?

(I'm worried)

janeth · #5 (**permalink**) 10-16-2006, 01:28 PM

The problem can be fixed in the text.

I have no idea what this means or what it can do for me.

Quote:

Single Page PayPal Website Template

I might be able to help if I better understood.

What is it that your product can do for me?

ran_dizolph · #6 (**permalink**) 10-16-2006, 03:46 PM

well, for starters, 'grammer' is spelled 'grammar'.

Kinley · #7 (**permalink**) 10-16-2006, 04:05 PM

Haha! very funny :)
Thanks for that...

The product is a website template which includes a PHP module that handles online payents, it is connected with PayPal and on successful payments it sends the customer a secure download link, that only he can use (It uses his PayPal transaction ID).

The benfits are obvious, the website runs for it's own and taking care of the orders without any intervention.