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Hello Everyone,
My friends and I have developed a social networking website and need some expertise advise to make it better. the url is: www.minglenow.com Minglenow is a password protected website therfore, I am also including dummy Id and password for proper reviewing. User: justin_cornick@yahoo.com pwd: tester |
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I like the colors...very web 2.0. I wasn't able to find the log-in either.
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still no luck...upon submission of the email address I am getting a notice that an email has been sent. Thats pretty much it. Was that what we were supposed to see?
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Hi: Your home page really looks nice. I think you might have something here-- a successful site in the future. The name is catchy. I think people will remember it and I think it's a good idea. It seems rare enough and has a nice soft modern design.
I too tried to get in but things apparently still aren't working right. Good luck with the testing stages of development. |
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Nice design! Users can always tell when you are "overdoing" the graphics! With bold colors like those, less is more. I like the URL also! Keep up the good work!
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The colors and layout of the site look very appealing
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Sheetal
I'm also only getting the "Thank you for your e-mail" page after I've logged in the dummy address. However, observations on reaching thus far: 1. The graphics, colours, text and the point size of the text look great (although I wasn't keen on the animated M talking to the animated N before I'd logged in). 2. Your sentence, "Connect with the places you go." is not proper English. You'd be better saying, "Connect with the places you go to" or "Connect with the places you visit". You also wouldn't start the second sentence using "And". It can work in some cases but I don't think it does here. How about trying, "Connect with the places you visit and the people who go there" or even, "Connect with the places you visit, and the people who go there." This way you're avoiding repetition of "go" and the sentence is still concise. 3. Would it be advisable, after you've said, "Thank You. Your email address has been received", to tell people what's going to happen next? You could also turn this passive sentence into an active one by saying something along the lines of, "Thank you for submitting your e-mail address. Please check your inbox now for your unique Mingle Now password" etc. Hope this helps and good luck with your venture.
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