Would like feed back on my site.

dreamworldaccess · #1 (**permalink**) 06-26-2006, 12:11 AM

Greetings everyone.I think I have finaly gotten my swebsite in professional looking and working order. Yes Ii realize that It's A template website. But for A guy that's to picky to design one for himself. This was the best thing I could do. So please give me any feed back that you can. I'll be happy to take any helpful hint's to make my site better.

http://www.dreamworldaccess.net

Paul B · #2 (**permalink**) 06-26-2006, 08:32 AM

Sorry to tell you it's a mess in n both IE6 anf FF. The images are split on teh home page - the guy rather painfully under the eyes.

Pages load slowly - not a good advertisement for a hosting company - nor is payment by paypal...

Tamaloo · #3 (**permalink**) 06-28-2006, 06:27 AM

I can't comment on the techie aspects but the spelling, grammar and punctuation are shocking. You need remedial attention on all of these areas. Sorry.

MarcieZoob · #4 (**permalink**) 06-30-2006, 07:53 AM

Oh my, the home page navigation bar and category images are a mess. The intro text needs to written by someone who knows English (spelling and grammar).

ran_dizolph · #5 (**permalink**) 06-30-2006, 10:17 AM

whoa.

your code is in serious need of attention. it kinda hurts my eyes looking at the markup.

and i agree with the others...if you want to be taken seriously, get a copywriter.

cz · #6 (**permalink**) 07-01-2006, 02:07 AM

Ditto on the remarks above friend. It did look fine on my 17" monitor 1024x768 Internet Explorer 6.0

Are you trying to brand the name Dream World Access.net? It's taking up a lot of <title> real estate where you could get some other keywords/snippets in. I wouldn't put it in every title myself.

I clicked on FAQ and was whisked away to a different domain that tried to get me to switch my homepage - darn I hate those!!

I tried to duplicate this before submitting this post but can't do it again. I thought I should mention it though.

You have some good solid comments to start the overhaul of the existing site. It looks like there's potential there to me. Best of luck!