hello everyone!
I was a member here a long long time ago in a cyberalaxy not so far from here lol

but since then I had become to busy to bounce in here until now.

anywho's, I'd really, really appreciate it if you all would review my site and tell me what you think and what I can do to make it better.

http://www.chatxplanet.com

I will reciprocate all reviews.
Thank you!

Dan

It's ok, I'm not the sensitive type lol. I truly need your professional feedback to make this site a great place for all


Thank you

Overall I don't really like the site. Graphically it's too boxy and divided, with no seamless flow between header, menu and main text area. I also did not like the different layouts you used in some of the sections, and think that they would be best served if they were standard. Your logo on the top left needs lots of work, and the title on the top right needs to be bigger. The idea is fun, but the implementation needs work.

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HC Concepts - Creative and Strategic Business Services.

My comments are on two fronts - build integrity and design.

On the first, you have 44 mark up errors - check at
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=ht...xplanet.com%2F

It is good practice these days to have your site comply with W3 conventions.

On the design front, the logo could be great but needs work to make legible. Sorry do not like left sidebar as too bitty. Perhaps a better use of color would make this look part of site rather than something that is tagged on.

Also worth being more emphatic about what the site is about cos I haven't a clue unless I read deeply. You need to catch the interest quickly - remember it is the web where attention span is measured in seconds.

It's a start, but needs work to make it work.

Ian

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SEO Specialist, CSS Developers

I agree that you need to validate your code and clean it up. There is also a lot of "white space" in the markup.

Also the welcome at the top seems like the logo and the letters are not very crisp. Maybe need to make it a smaller font size or replace it with an image.

I like the fact that its mostly text so that it makes it easy for the search engines to read.

Good luck.

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賃貸 大阪 | Alaris

First impression: very strong blue. I like your combination of divs and tables and I think the result is quite unique, looks like a lot of work. The left hand column is really good, like the layout, rollover etc. My only comments would be as follows:
1. welcome and chatxplanet need some padding
2. the dark blue round welcome is too dark
3. stretch the menu under welcome right to the edges (ie make each one bigger and fill that space
4. I'm not sure about the green text on 'abductees'

The other pages in the site are quite different and don't appear to relate to the front at all. There is a lack of coherence in this.

Back to the index page: It is original and pleasant to use.

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The WhOle is GreAter than the SUm of the PArts

www.passingphase.co.nz

not too bad, but you should make it clearer what your site is all about. People tend to abandon a website if they cannot get a grasp of what the site is all about after looking at the entry page for a few seconds. So here is what they see:

"Welcome"
O.K, but not informative in any way

"Invading Earth Since 2006"
I have no idea what this means, but at least it makes me curious because this is so cryptic :-) (was this your intention?)

"Advertize with us"
Reading this text in the most prominent upper left position would make me go away. Is this what your site is about?

"Finally a site where you can be yourself and not worry about being kicked, banned or Klined just for having fun!"
This is the first body text sentense and may be read by those few that have not yet been scared away. You are telling me that I will have fun with your site, but this contrasts with your site design, which does not look like having fun, but has a more rational style. You also tell me what I must not expect, rather than giving me a hint what you have to offer.

See what I mean? Try to be more informative and make your visitors curious!

pollyx

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