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Old 06-18-2006, 09:46 PM
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Let me know what you think. I try to get the max space for keyword length of inward links. It's a site I made from scratch with php and mysql.
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Old 06-20-2006, 02:18 AM
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Interesting topic, certainly out of the ordinary.

The page looks a bit "bland". It has too much white space, and with the white background, it gives it an impression of not being finished or missing something. You might consider a textured background or something to "fill things in".

Minor thing, but some of the cell contents are not left-justified, giving it a air of "floating". I think most of us are accustomed to left-justified paragraphs.

All in all, a neat blog! Good luck with it!
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a bit of colour would be very helpful :)
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Old 06-20-2006, 07:23 AM
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Looks unfinished. Is it supposed to?

I can't get home.

I didn't know Austria were playing:

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Austria started off surprisingly very string against the strong offense of brazil.
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Old 06-20-2006, 01:48 PM
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Thanks for the review. The result you see is the result of playing a lot with fonts and width. I'm not sure what to do with color. Adding color needs to have some kind of balance and complement colors along with it and that gets complicated to balance along the the navigation and main frame. Most all major news sites have plain white for their content and a blue for their navigation, but putting the side links in some kind of layout would limit how many keywords I can add.
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I agree with the other reviewers, it is in need of formatting. You've chosen a very tech looking font for the links which only appeals to geeks, and while most people are using sans, you have chosen serif, The dotted line at the top gives a temporary look.

Play round a bit with fonts and add the odd line or what here and there to get some life into the page. The little pics under "tag this..." are good.
Pleasant site, just needs interior decoration
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