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Old 01-26-2004, 06:24 PM
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I could use some constructive critiscim.

www.bubblystuff.com

Thanks and hope all is well!


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Old 01-26-2004, 08:15 PM
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Just a few points I'd suggest...

First, the animated background is a little distracting. I'd get rid of that.
Secondly, the font you've used for your menu is a little difficult to read. Is there a solid version of that font?
I also don't like the mouse over effect on the links. I feel it's best to stick with convention.

Otherwise, the site is laid out very well - it's colourful and fun as it should be as you're selling a colourful and fun product.

Good luck!
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Old 01-26-2004, 08:35 PM
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Although it is cute and colorful, the moving background ends up attracting the viewers eyes. But it's a bad thing coz they don't read the text. You've lost a potential client that way.

Images must compliment text, not the other way around.

I wish you much success.
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Old 01-27-2004, 03:08 AM
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Yeah, those bubbles, as appropriate as they may be, are distracting; I could see using them as an element (though not a background) to my logo--perhaps use it as the bg of a single table cell, then put your logo in another cell to the right of it, something on that order.

Given the nature of your business, I'd say go wild; have fun with it.

The other guys are right about the font in the menu; there are other fonts which are 1.) fun, 2.) colorful & 3.) reminiscent of inflatable objects. Again, don't be afraid to fool around with--we do this in large part because it is fun.

The graphics, which are nicely done, load quicker than I thought they would; nice job.

Your site expresses the fun and the whimsy I imagine is inherent to fans of inflatable furniture; this is not a slam, just an observation based on personal experience with people who own plastic & rubber furniture.

Terrific job--you should make a ton of money...


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Old 01-27-2004, 03:22 AM
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Hi there,
Nice start, simple and clear as soap bubbles...
As previously mentionned, I would change the font next to the items, not always easy to read.
Why not keep the same background, but have it steady, not animated?
Can take much more keywords...
Good luck,
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