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Old 05-23-2006, 09:32 AM
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Straightforward main page serves the purpose except there is emphasis on "job openings" rather then something more service specific or a highlight about your business at the top right of the page. Word spacing needs to be addressed in your services area.

Many others here can help with the seo/sem portion of your project. I'm just giving my opinion as a prospective customer (but I did find the meta "description" interesting).
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I guess the design of the site is okay... It's attractive, but I'm not seeing anything that really triggers my imagination.

The flash movie is nice (and easy to ignore). I was dissappointed that I couldn't read about vehicle tracking. I guess that'll be on the "GPS Application" page? (I hate "under contruction" signs, and personally never link to an under-construction page on a "live" website.)

On the homepage...

This sentence needs fixed right away: "We Are solutions provider & innovators."

This one too: "We specialise in high level development in the field of GPS and Database Integration." (It should be "specialize" with a "z".)

This sounds tentative and insecure: "Glencoe Technologies aims to be a leader in Global Positioning System (GPS) technology. We would like to target the consumer market." You need to be more confident than that!

Frankly, IMHO, your "about us" page says NOTHING to me. "...established to excel in the field of Information Technology by providing various products and services in the market." That b.s. describes about half the companies on the web.

The contact-us page is missing a phone number or the name of an actual person. It doesn't make it clear which office you prefer I contact for any given purpose. It doesn't provide an e-mail address... just a tiny little form. IMHO, it's just not very "inviting". If you want to maximize the number of sales leads your website creates, this contact-us page needs to change!

Under "web development" you say "we work with large companies all over the world." On the one hand, I think that could be off-putting to anyone who doesn't represent a large or multi-national company. On the other hand, you fail to provide evidence that the statement is true... if I WERE representing a large company I'd expect to see the names of other large customers. Of course, if you're really big-time, you don't need to tell anyone that you're big time. They'd already know.

I agree with dartman that you should rethink that "description" tag. You're using it as a keyword tag, and a spammy keyword tag at that. How many times does the word "India" appear in it? (about 10?) Oddly, it's nowhere to be found in the rest of the homepage, including the actual keyword tag. I'd strongly suggest you think of the description tag as the "default" description that search engines will give searchers to help them select which result to click on. Put something persuasive there... something pithy and customer-benefit focused.

If "India" is an important keyword, you need to use it in a variety of places.

Good luck with it.

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