Hello WPW!

I have been the designer for the above website for the last 3 years, and have recently been given the task of sorting the SEO. I think I have done a reasonable job so far, but would hugely appreciate any advice or suggestions as to where you think our sites could be improved:

http://www.businessesforsale.com
http://www.franchisesales.com

Many, many thanks,
Brad

Search on "business"

Meta Keywords: Fair
"business" appears 6 times in the keyword tag (too many times)
127 Words 73 Phrase(s) 905 Character(s).
Your keyword appears at least 1 time in the meta tag but the number of keywords is very high. The number of keywords does not fall within the optimum range of 7 and 48 words.

Meta Description: Fair
34 Words 194 Characters
Your keyword appears at least 1 time in the meta tag but the number of words in the description is high. Optimally, you should have between 12 and 24 words.

Meta Keywords MUST be used in Body Text. You are MISSING WORDS from your viewable text that appear in Meta Tags.

Your keyword appears at least 3 times in the viewable text on the page and your body text is within the recommended range. Consider using your keyword at least 4 times in the viewable text on this page. You are missing words from the BODY that do appear in the Keyword Meta tag.

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