Im a one man business and am trying to save money etc. by doing my own sites. Would you please look at the two that I have done and give me some much needed guidence...Mark

www.westvalleysales.com
www.equaliserWA.com


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here is my review on west valley site


Firstly get rid of this:
<meta name="robots" content="all">
<meta name="robots" content="index,follow">
<meta name="rating" content="general">
<meta name="Generator" content="Microsoft FrontPage 4.0">


Add these Meta
<meta name="description" content="Tractors,Trailers,Implements and Battery Equaliser, Haul your Tractor,Golf Car, Horses or Household Items>
<meta name="Keywords" content="tractors,batteries,dump,car hauler,additives,fork-lift,Trailers,boats,farm equipment,golf cart,golf car,utility,horses,Kubota,John Deere"
<META NAME="Author" CONTENT="West Valley Sales LLC">
<META NAME="robots" CONTENT="index, follow">
<META NAME="GOOGLEBOT" CONTENT="INDEX, FOLLOW">


Check out http://ejrs.com/webmasters.html


Get your client to invest in the affiliate program called AssocTrac2.5 that I have listed there. Give people the chance to earn commissions by adding the html to their site. Them linking to the site will boost your client ratings on google too. It is a sure win situation.

I went from 200 visits per day to 15,000 visits and users of my site every day. Not on one but on 2 sites I get 15,000 visits each. And it took only 6 months. Try it, you can't go wrong.


Your Site Design is Unnecessarily Cluttered.
Please redesign your site to fit to a MAX width of 750 px. No more than that. People don't want to scroll left-right to view contents and up-down too. Too confusing and frustrating. If you keep to the rule, your client will be happier... You really want that.

TEXT.
You need good copy. Your site has pics but not enough info for a search engine to list you well. What'son your metatag (description) should be within the text on your page to optimize searches.

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Check out http://ejrs.com/webmasters.html

Invest in the affiliate program called AssocTrac2.5 that I have listed there. Give people the chance to earn commissions by adding the html to their site. Them linking to the site will boost your client ratings on google too. It is a sure win situation.

I went from 200 visits per day to 15,000 visits and users of my site every day. Not on one but on 2 sites I get 15,000 visits each. And it took only 6 months. Try it, you can't go wrong.


I hope this was comprehensive enough for you.

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here is my review the equaliser site


Firstly, reformat your Metatags as I outlined in previous review.


Please redesign your site to fit to a MAX width of 750 px. No more than that.

TEXT.
You need good copy.

IMAGES
Your images will ruin you. They are too pixelated. They clutter up your site and does it tremendous injustice.

BACKGROUND
Needs to be removed. Go with plain white, but that bground is attention seeking. Images and backgrounds need to compliment text, not the other way around.

Wishing you great success. God bless.

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