Hello Friends,
I am new to the forum.
Please have a look on my site and give your valuable suggestions.
Url is:
http://www.dobhaltechnologies.com
Thank You!
Andy Jones.

I like the colors but the left nav. looks out of place.

The whole left side looks to wide to me.

Why the big ugly WWW at the bottom left side of the page?

No phone number, I would not do business with anyone that I could not talk to on the phone.

The girl in the header looks cut off and it looks like something should be on the right side of her.

It's hard to know where I should start reading. It seems to me it would be better to have a set of text on the home page that tells me what it is you can do for me.

We have hosting, web promotion and website design. Which is it that your doing?

Your logo tells me nothing about what it is that you do.

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Andy

I have to agree with janeth on her points. I'm sure the design of the site took you a while to do but for me, standard library shots of random chisel-jawed models staring at monitors and laptops just makes your site look like; well, most of the other sites that offer similar services.

I found the text quite heavy to wade through in places and I wasn't sure exactly where it was that your strengths lie. I'd suggest that you get someone to proof read your text to eliminate errors in grammar and/or punctuation and also consider re-writing some of the over-wordy sections.

I suspect, rightly or wrongly, that the company is very small. That's not a criticism, just an observation from looking at your site; and if you are, you are certainly offering a huge array of services.

You don't include copywriting as one of your offerings. Let me know if you want to add that to the portfolio.

Good luck

I agree with Janeth on contact info. That can never be to good.

In my view it is one of the better designed sites that has been reviewed here in this forum, at least the sites I have looked at.

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Hi Andy.
It looks like you have done a lot of work.
Watch your spelling.
At the top right you have a graphic that says "Everything you need for you web service. The last you should be "your".

Janeth is right about telling your visitors what you can do for them rather than what you do.

So I know you do offshore outsourcing. I still don't know why I should use your services. When I go to the "more" link, I get a surprise, the page text is a different color. And it is hard for me to read.

Another thing you offer is hosting. But you do not have any links to your hosting plans.

There is more, but perhaps you get the idea.
Clean up your page. Simplify. Write to tell folks what you are going to do for them, not what you do.

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