Please review my Website

kingstonballer · #1 (**permalink**) 03-27-2006, 07:29 AM

Hi,

This is my first proper website for a comercial website.

www.swishbasketball.co.uk

please could you review the design and the use of content rather then the actual content as i had no options with this. any commnets would be appreciated.

thanks
jason

mavahntooth · #2 (**permalink**) 03-27-2006, 08:10 AM

ill vote for six... not a good design i guess.

Paul B · #3 (**permalink**) 03-27-2006, 09:44 AM

You seem to have all the elements there - it's just a bit of a confusing jumble.

I don't see the point of the splash page, it justs adds another barrier between you and your potential customers. The 'magic three clicks' is used up just getting to the doors of the store. You need to have only three clicks to the products they want to buy.

In fact for balls there are another 4 clicks to reach the products. I see you can cut out this long route by not clicking 'enter online shop', but simply click the menu item 'balls' - so why have the long trip too??

JuniorOnline · #4 (**permalink**) 03-27-2006, 10:13 AM

if you left align the text - it will be easier to read and the page will look more organised.

there is a lot of space to make use of. why everuthing has to be on one line? divide the 4 categories into 2 per line. and make use of the coloured headers.

the product images and their prices/details, can have a nice thin #cccccc border 1px. this will make it more organised.

Good luck