Berliner Web Design - berlinerwebdesign.bravepages.com

shesarainbo · #1 (**permalink**) 07-13-2003, 05:09 AM

Hi everyone,
Please review my site, it is still being worked on, but it is mostly done. Thanks for any constructive critique.

http://berlinerwebdesign.bravepages.com

Sincerely,
Robin Berliner
Shesarainbo

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brigham · #2 (**permalink**) 07-13-2003, 07:11 AM

Gday

Why don't you leave the advertising on the top of your index site. Than your site visitors would not have to scroll to see the whole page.

I don't understand why you link to the Kaplan College. Is this some kind of advertising?

Your awards site is not working yet, but I assume as you are still working on this site that it will be coming soon, if not leave it for now and add it when you have received an award.

hope this helps

shesarainbo · #3 (**permalink**) 05-20-2004, 02:26 AM

I totally agree, but at the time, I did not have the budget for paid hosting. I now have my own domain. The new location is http://berlinerweb.com

Thanks so much.

Anyone else who may see this request for review, please do not, as I am still learning, and do not want to embarass myself in this forum. Thanks to all for help and your comments.
Sincerely,

DavidB · #4 (**permalink**) 05-20-2004, 03:54 AM

The site has the makings of a really nice site. Moving to a paid hosting really has improved the overall look, with much less destraction. I do feel that you should work on tying your navigation more into the page. At the moment, all your content is shown in the box, with your navigation seperated on the left hand side.

Other than that, a good start.