We just finished revamping our site and I was hoping to get as much feedback as possible. Good and bad I'll take it all.

You can find the site here http://www.veradicetechnologies.com

Thanks in adavance.

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Hi Steven

The site looks good and functional. One thing I notice about the site you have under your signature www.shutterific.com does not seem to fit your profile. Looks like that is click through site now.

Thanks
Tom

I would have to say that it's not clear from your homepage who your intended client is or who YOU are. Your company seems to be a mixture of internet marketing "but also" business accounting--the two couldn't be any more different. I would separate those services into different websites.

Your homepage should be a simple, to-the-point index of services you offer. NAME OF SERVICE, followed by a brief description of the service with a link to the main page for that subject in which you elaborate. Get rid of the jargon like, "a full service development firm, working in all mediums." That means absolutely nothing to me as a potential customer any more than the following cliche about "thinking outside the box" does. How do those statements translate to the real world in terms of what you DO, and why you're BETTER than the other guy?

Also, if I were a business looking for web development I don't want to read about the different software used to create websites. Your presentation of the software almost implies that it, rather than your creative talents, are what make for a great website, and if that were true, why wouldn't I just buy that and do my own site? While it's ok to show the sites you have under way, as a business customer I only want to know what you're going to do for me and why it will work the way I want it to, without the techno jargon from the software packaging.

Finally, you offer mass email marketing as a service, but you have a link to "Virus & Spam" under Useful Resources, wherein the content of that page offers news bites about people being busted for spamming. Your webpage having to do with mass email marketing says nothing about your conforming with the Can Spam Act yourself -- do you see the irony here? Get rid of one or the other because the two cannot coexist and make sense.

All excellent suggestions that I will be working on today.

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Hi,

The logos on the menu items display your skills nicely.

The About Us page would be more readable if the text were broken up into paragraphs.

Regarding this company's area of expertise, the photo, it is interesting, but maybe too interesting. The size, focus and whatever he is carrying look a bit distracting. His clothes don't fit very well, either. It probably is a stock photo, but there are better ones available.

The photo on the homepage is better. However, the man in the foreground with the missing head and the artsy style is also distracting. (Not sure if you're trying to say something with that stylish look.) By the way, that is an awfully big monitor.