hello,

Can someone please provide some valuable suggestions to my website so that i can enhance it accordingly. I already posted this thread but seems like it didnt get posted for some reason. thanks

website: http://www.motionrise.com

Upon first glance, I have no idea what you do. Even after skimming the first few paragraphs, it's still not clear. You have only a few seconds to grab someone's attention so focus on doing that with your graphics and scaled-down text on your home page.

The first thing that caught my eye is "Web pages from scratch", which sounds really odd to me.

Go easy on your META tags, you've got way too many!

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Hiya,

i had a look at ur code and thought I mention this:
your using the XHTML Ccoding which is great.. the break
at some points you used

keep it consistent:)


nice site.. not too sure why MarcieZoob felt lost and couldnt tell what the site what it was about.

My only recommendation is making the main homepage more creative.. and use the verdana font size 10 - this will make the text look more professional and you will need to work on the images for the menu as they are not clear.

thanks,
T

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I would like to thank everyone for their continuing effort to comment on the site.. its really nice to hear different things.. m gonna implement every idea that clicks me..thanks

Just had a quick look at the site and I agree with MarcieZoob. From our experiences, your home page has only a few seconds to capture a customers attention. The opening paragraphs/sentences unfortunately didn't grab me at all.

I suggest you should cut lots of the text out and replace with two sections: "What we do" and "What we can do for you". Under each add some illustrative graphics and one of two words such as "Web Design", "Business Cards" etc etc.

Also suggest lighting up the website a bit more with some slightly brighter colours. The site seemed a bit dark and the nav keys not so easy to read.

Again, that's just having a quick look so hope it helps.

Yes indeed that is a good idea to make categories and add some images as i was suggested before by other people.
I used my laptop to make this site and i notice the same thing that you are noticing.. i see a bit dark colors on my desktop but when i view it on my laptop it seems very nice with peaceful colors. Eventhough, i have the same resolution and color set on my laptop. The only difference is my laptop screen is smaller. But other then that i will incorporate your thoughts cause i do appreciate them. I have fixed up my meta tags as i was suggested earlier. But for somereason none of the search engines seem to pick up my website. i guess my metatags arent good enough as yet.
Any other comments and critics will be valuable. Thank you once again to everyone