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Old 02-05-2006, 05:49 PM
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Hello,

I am new in website business and i was hoping to get some legitimate feedback on my website that i have created. Would someone kindly reply back and let me know if there are any areas that i can improve. All replies will be valuable to me. Thanks in advance

my website is http://www.motionrise.com
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Old 02-05-2006, 06:40 PM
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I think this should probably be moved to submit your site for review ... but anyway

The site looks nice and clean ... but why all the meta tags? They account for a majority of the errors reported by w3c for your site.

The page also appears to scroll at 800x600
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Old 02-05-2006, 07:00 PM
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ya i guess ur right about thta..m not really sure as to how i should write my meta tags so that it will have a impact on my marketing. But thanks for ur reply though
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Old 02-05-2006, 07:41 PM
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HI soldja,

I moved your post to the site review forum.
I think it's nice, but you need to do something about the orange and blue links at the bottom of the site.

I also think you need to reconsider the front page.
Right off, it doesn't really tell me or give me a feel of what you do without having to read every word
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Old 02-05-2006, 08:17 PM
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hi cyanide,

i really like what you actually commented on. i had that in my mind that my homepage needs to be a bit more flashy in relavence to my work. But im kinda lacking in ideas of what to have there.. Will you be able to suggest somefin to me. Thank you once again, really appreciate what you all have to say.
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Old 02-05-2006, 08:54 PM
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Well, I would suggest you focus on your services. Your home page is your most important page, that will receive the most page views.

YOu need to be able to tell us right away what it is you do. If it is Web Development, then put that in larger letters. Pictures/photos are always nice too. What you offer people(your services) needs to be front and center.

Things like:
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Customer satisfaction is our top priority and we ensure you'll get the most reliable service with the limited budget that you may have to invest into your project.
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Take a look at our services page to see our special new packages.

Please, don't hesitate to call us today or recieve free quote here and find out what we can do for you. We are very confident that you will be happy with your decision and that you will benefit from it.
are wasted space on the front page, you can elaborate on them on sub-pages
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