my site is http://www.flash-video-mx.com


thank you again!

hello,
the first thing that i notice is that you have used the bold for your section headings as well as to emphasise words in the actual content, this makes it look like there are alot subsections in the text.
Try changing the section headings to <h3>, changing the colour or making the words in the actual text italic instead of bold.
mark.

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I like it - but the look and feel of it is scattered.. the best way to overcome that by grouping the sections in boxes (preferabbly using CSS - positioning).

For example: the right hand column, could have a faded, thin border around it. Also the Key feature seaction could have an over all border to group them all together.

The titles on the page are lost at the moment, I would recommend either making the font a bit bigger for the title, or, adding a background colour to the row they are placed on.

The buy now, learn more buttons, should all be on the top right hand side of the page OR add some space between them and the current text above them.

The flash video tout should be a bit smaller and more aligned with the LHS menu. am not too sure about the position of the support section, it feels like it has been dumped there...

Finally, the use of bold is good, but i think with the first paragraph and the right hand column, it has been used way too much. It does get confusing and distracting for the reader:)

Hope my comments help.
Good luck
T

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Good product. Not sure if the colours in the animation fit with the blue banner. Layout is okay but could be improved. I think that three columns is too many here and you should revert to 2. Most users like me, at the moment, use 768 x 1024 and it is far too busy on this first page.

The animation is better on pages without the blue banner and so is the layout.

An effective, simple, easy to use site.

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Video_to_Flash - excellent work. The site looks sooo much better and far more organised now:)

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