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Old 12-17-2005, 08:46 PM
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Hello All,
Would you guys have a look at my adsense site and let me know if it checks out ok?

Thank you kindly,
Smiley

http://workathomebusiness.smileycomm.com/
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Old 12-18-2005, 05:39 AM
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First off if you run you site through www.copyscape.com you will see that your text is used word for word on a number of other sites. This means that you will be unlikely to be ranked in google due to duplicate content penalty.

That aside, the page is very drab. The text needs left padding, the left column is a complete waste of valuable space.

To be success at this type of site you are going to need lots of pages of fresh and original content...
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Old 12-18-2005, 07:03 AM
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I agree with Paul's comments but the one I need to stress again is content. If your text is duplicated word for word elsewhere, get creative. Your site needs to be unique in order to stand out from the MILLIONS of work-at-home sites.

Your site navigation needs to be more prominent; move it closer to the top of the page. The link to your "News" page takes you to a blank page so either add content, fix your RSS feed or remove that page from your navigation.
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Old 12-18-2005, 04:36 PM
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Originally Posted by Paul B
First off if you run you site through www.copyscape.com you will see that your text is used word for word on a number of other sites. This means that you will be unlikely to be ranked in google due to duplicate content penalty.

That aside, the page is very drab. The text needs left padding, the left column is a complete waste of valuable space.

To be success at this type of site you are going to need lots of pages of fresh and original content...
Thank you for the review will get on these items per. your suggestions wow didn't know it was that bad but honesty is what I wanted and certainly thats what I got.

Thank you kindly,
Smiley (e-info_man)
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Old 12-18-2005, 04:46 PM
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I agree with Paul's comments but the one I need to stress again is content. If your text is duplicated word for word elsewhere, get creative. Your site needs to be unique in order to stand out from the MILLIONS of work-at-home sites.

Your site navigation needs to be more prominent; move it closer to the top of the page. The link to your "News" page takes you to a blank page so either add content, fix your RSS feed or remove that page from your navigation.
Thank you for your review of my site, as mentioned to Paul in an earlier post Didn't know it was that bad but I wanted an honest assesment and certainly that was done. Your list of items to correct has been noted and I will get on that ASAP!

Thank you kindly,
Smiley (e-info_man)
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