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Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

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Old 12-08-2005, 12:21 AM
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Default www.dealsondells.com Honest opinions please I can take it!

This is my first site after being out of the game since the days of flashing text and animated gifs. I think it's a site that can be helpful to people if they are buying a Dell. Obviously I am set up as an affiliate. Does it look amatuerish or somewhat professional?

Thanks!

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Old 12-08-2005, 02:11 AM
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IMO it looks professional enough to get you conversions. It certainly shouldn't scare anyone away.
It loads fast, navigation is straightforward, and I like the tables. I also like that your home page is essentially FAQs. It works better than a piece of fluff opening page which requires an extra click to get actual information.
Two suggestions: maybe a picture or two would be nice, as it looks a little plain; and I would watch your keyword META, as they say repetition is bad - you might be better off with "dell coupons" and then single words.
SEO people, what do you think?
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Old 12-08-2005, 12:30 PM
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Thanks ccera for your response. I will turn down the META tags a bit and I think a picture or two of a laptop or something is a great idea. Thanks again!
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Old 12-09-2005, 07:10 AM
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Your site definitely needs some graphical interest - by adding images of the products themselves, that should help. It's hard to visualize through text.

Does this affiliate offer an RSS Feed? I would think it would be easier to maintain the site and the ongoing specials.

My only comment is add some cell padding (your text is right against the column borders)... Oh, and you need to focus on your keyword density. Obviously, your density for "dell" is dangerously high.
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