I don't care for the copy very much... I see lots of grammar and style problems there! There are also lots of typos.
The "look" of the site itself doesn't bug me so much - but I wouldn't have constructed it the way you did, with tons of table formatting, and with graphic elements cut into little fragments (sized to match the cells of the respective tables). What a pain to build... and what a nightmare to maintain too! You could simplify the design by layering text on top of images (using z-index, which is what I'd do), or you could make "holes" in images (i.e. by using gifs instead of jpegs, and making text areas to be encircled by graphics "transparent".)
I really like the look of your little mouse-over trick on the homepage. It looks to me like you're ready to learn CSS!
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