Hey I am trying to get the one page sales letter type of site going and am wondering about the layout, heading, etc.

I've only done a few of these and can't hardly stand doing them. I have a ton of sites under my belt and took great care in making them look good.....All of the suggested sales letter formats are not very eloquent IMHO.

http://articleforce.com is the site.

Does anyone have any suggestions, or links to better looking one-page sales letter type of sites?

Thanks

Why the quotes who is talking? Just do a good descriptive paragraph about what the site is going to do a "desriptive tag" Then talk a little more about what ever. I would get rid of all that yellow a put it on items that need the most attention. Good luck.

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Thanks, I appreciate your input.

Just think "Press Release" and you will get more sign ups I think. I do not think that any savy webmaster would fill out your form at the moment the way you have it. You also might want to put some $ amounts like. You can reserve a $20.00 a month subscription right now by signing up for our news letter.bla bla. After we have 200 members bla bla the normal price for this will be $50.00. Act now and we will honor this price plan for 5 years.
Just an idea. I am not a good salesman. Probably why no one here is talking about how to get higher results in my yoddle search engine. Good luck.

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I run a mile when i see sites designed this way.. usually I am not even bothered to check what is on offer.

total re-design i would highly recommend.. use normal font size..big does not mean easier to read..it actually makes the eye less focused. smaller font, less red and more content to make the message more effective..

good luck

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I used to run a mile when I saw these too, but have accepted them as a part of Internet sales pages these days. I have purchased good products off of these types of pages.
The sales page you saw was basically a blueprint from Corey Rudl's marketing center. He was a highly successful Internet marketer prior to his death this year.

All that said, I really do appreciate your input. Perhaps I could redesign and arrive at some type of happy medium that would be acceptable to "fresh people" and seasoned Internet veterans like you.

Thanks