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Old 11-21-2005, 09:29 AM
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Hello
I have just recently finished building my website and I am looking for other peoples opinions.
constructive critisism is welcome :)

http://skrewball.ws
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Old 11-21-2005, 10:19 AM
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This is the type of websites I flee immediately. Asking for an email address on the front page on the front page is often considered too much.
Hope it helps, S.
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Old 11-22-2005, 07:28 AM
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Not exactly a web site just an email collection page.
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Old 11-22-2005, 09:15 AM
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Not exactly a web site just an email collection page.
And this is why many people will bounced immediately.
If you want people to stay, you have to provide more information, if possible, on different pages.
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Old 11-22-2005, 11:14 AM
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Not exactly a web site just an email collection page.
my sentiment exactly... you gotta have more information as to why I should give you my email. let your visitor know what so special about that free report.. only then people will be curious to learn more about it and give you their email address in exchange for the information.

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Old 11-22-2005, 11:55 AM
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Sorry... One more of those. Do you really want us to critique this site of just leave our emails?
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Old 11-22-2005, 12:46 PM
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I come a cross many sites similar to this one..and I find myself clicking the back button straight away! why?

mmm.. well.. looking at it for the first 10 seconds I get the feeling this site will offer me nothing..maybe this is me being judgemental.. the very large text heading would put me off immediately (sorry) - but you really need to make it smaller, get rid of the red font, use colours that are easier to read...

centralising the heading also gives the feeling this is an advert rather than a website... left align them...

whiter background with dark blue fonts might give your pages more of a professional look and feel and get people to trust you more.
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