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Old 11-16-2005, 02:54 PM
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Default Another Site by Me - www.cuisinebycarleen.com

hey guys ...yet another site by me for your review and feedback.

http://www.cuisinebycarleen.com

and let me know if you are tired of me posting sites of mine (they are around 100 i think)

so you guys want me to continue posting my sites here on regular basis for you to oogle and comment on ?

lemme know :P
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Nice, but the font is not ideal for the web. Sans serif is better, easier to read.

There's a lot of space wasted before the header appears. Can you push the header up and make use of that space? It's practical because you get more info in before the reader has to scroll down.

Also, the home page could use a compelling headline.

Overall, elegant and attractive. Nice colors.

Hope this is helpful.

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Old 11-18-2005, 02:17 AM
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Very nice site. Too bad this service isn't anywhere near where I live!

It is good to see a site like this for inspiration, so keep them coming. Need to see good and bad sites to learn from. Although I personally do not think the font is hard to read, and since all websites seem to be looking more and more the same, is is nice to see a different font that is not too hard to read. It may be time to revisit the conventional wisdom in this area.

The only problem I caught on the first page was one punctuation error "!." at the end of one of your paragraphs.

I did wonder about two identical css links in the code, what is that for?

I would appreciate it if you could review my site

http://www.learningmeasure.com

it is pushed way down, probably page 2 or 3 in this forum. thanks.
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Old 11-18-2005, 02:46 AM
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I am not that keen on the italic font used, but I must confess it does serve a purpose. And the colours are VERY nice, the layout is pleasant and the images make me wanna eat, so they are indeed very good.

I like the site. Congratulations for a nice looking project :)
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Old 11-18-2005, 05:04 AM
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Thanks for pinpointing double css links. I corrected that... also the punctuation.

I saw your site..its simple and serves the purpose..but I see you have used frames. this method is obselete now. You might want to use include funtion instead of using frames.

It is possible to do in shtml files but I just rename my file ext to php and then I can use <? include ("filename") ?> where I want to include header file (a separate file)

hope you are getting me. I can help you do this .. you can message me on IM..
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Old 11-18-2005, 04:38 PM
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Hi, site looks pretty good.

I'm gonna agree about the font...it's a bit hard on the eyes (and if I'M saying that, you've got problems).

the overall style/performance is pretty good...although one thing (kind of nit-picking), you may want to replace the image of the chef on the 'about' page w/ a higher quality one...the jpg kinda makes her look about 200 years old.

hope that helps.
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