www.parkwayvalet.com

J Eggert · #1 (**permalink**) 11-09-2005, 07:01 PM

Hey guys,

My friend started up his own valet company, ParkWay Valet, and came to me to develop his website. The site is www.parkwayvalet.com

I was just curious what people think of the site. I still have a few ajustments to do to the site before it is 100% complete. I am going to change the "Application" button to "Join our Team" and then add a button for our clients to make it easier to access for browsers rather than having to go through the about us page. Also, we are going to switch up the format of the application and make it a 4page application devided up in sections.

Any feedback, positive or negative, would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks,

ccera · #2 (**permalink**) 11-13-2005, 12:34 AM

The overall impression is very professional. The navigation is not too bad, but the changes you've already mentioned will improve it.
You should have someone proofread your home page for spelling and grammar. I noticed at least 5 or 6 mistakes, which you don't want potential clients to see.
You did a great job of giving clear and concise information about the company, which should appeal to both potential clients and potential employees!
CiCi
http://www.metrorichmondrealestate.com/

skydream · #3 (**permalink**) 11-13-2005, 04:14 AM

very professional design.. i like the site.. simple and easy to navigate.. as mentioned, the grammer and spelling mistakes.. and also some sentences are rather long and that makes your sentence sounds weird. break up long sentence into short, easy to understand sentence will make your visitors understand what you want to sell to them.

your site lacks in the human touch, maybe u can put a group photograph of all employees to let your visitors know that they are really dealing with real people..

Paul B · #4 (**permalink**) 11-13-2005, 11:34 AM

Nice, simple, dignified presentation of a company's business.

A couple of small technical things: you need a declaration at the top of your code (<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN">) and the site wdith is over the 800 screen resolution - the horizontal scroll bar comes in at about 820 pixels.

J Eggert · #5 (**permalink**) 11-16-2005, 12:29 PM

Thank you very much for the advice. I will work on these changes right away.

Thanks again,

johngroup · #6 (**permalink**) 11-16-2005, 02:32 PM

Maybe a call to action, special feature you offer or something visual that grabs and set you apart.