I'll be greatly appreciative of your reviews.

First impression was that it looks good.

It might just be me, but I began to feel that the text was too close together - it seems a bit packed, maybe because it is bold?

Because I couldn't see any obvious faults I looked in detail (sorry :))...

You have a typo Isn't it what others offering to you?! - 'are' is missing.

You say this is the real deal for the video enthusiast that wants - perhaps change 'that' to 'who'? Makes it a bit more personal.

About half-way down the homepage you have the image projected on to a brick wall. The paragraph spacing underneath is a bit tight.

Under FAQ the first question is Is it harmful or danger for my TV? - should that be 'dangerous' or 'a danger'?

You have FAQ 7 Does the room must be dark for it to work? - needs re-phrasing.

FAQ 9 Do you supply projection lenses and what the price will be? - word order needs amending.

I won't labour the point further, but the only thing you need to do is have it proofread and tidy a few edges.

The product is fascinating too... :)

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Sualdam

your site looks good, except you have too much info on only one page... create several other pages and distribute the info among them.
The following should be your lead paragraph:
"TV WALL enables you to convert any regular TV into a high quality big screen projector, a rear projection unit or your wide-screen theater -- without spending thousands of dollars."

Immediately tell your viewers about your product, the benefits and features...
I did not see any pricing of the product... your potential customer will want to know "how Much?".. if they have to go through the checkout process to determine the price, you'll lose that person.
I saw something about $20 on the site... if that is the price, make it more prominent.
Although I did not check, please be sure that you list a physical address, phone and /or fax number... no one is going to give you money without knowing where you are.
Some of you text is really beyond the comprehension of your visitor... tailor it and simplify the language..
Good luck!

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Mary Ann
Affordable Websites Designed - www.m-goret.com

Thank you very much for your reviews. I'll work further on to fix the drawbacks in text. Yes, I realise that front page is (too) long. But, personnaly, I'd prefer to scroll a long page, if I'm interested in it's content, of-course -- instead of downloading new pages. And I'm going to try "multi-pages" design for a new website, then see which one will work better.
Thank you ones again.
Have a great day!

palapa

Hi,

OK - theres just too much going on on the front page. Being presented which a screen on text on the first page is very offputting for a lot of people. In my opinion you need to either make the titles bolded - or reorganise the text into a few more pages. From the front page its not obvious whether you are a business selling tvs, or a site that reviews them, etc.

There are quite alot of different colours too. Making the text red does not draw the users eye to it because there is simply too much of it. You need to prioritise the points you want to have the biggest impact and make them short, bold titles with the detail in black text below. Most people will be looking for a price immediately and if they do not see it - or a way of getting to it in less than about 15 seconds they will just leave, sadly.

The rollovers on the buttons also obscure what you are actually about to click on too, maybe you should reserve the colour change for the onClick event, rather than the onMouseOver instead - which is quite cool.

Hope that helps!

Cheers,
Steve