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Old 01-11-2004, 06:27 PM
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I would like someone's honest opinion about my website. I don't seem to be getting very much targeted traffic or sales. Do you see anything that I could change to improve my site? Thanks for your help.
Sherry
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Old 01-11-2004, 06:42 PM
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Nice design, easy navigation,

Just you use to much !!!!!! and you USE CAPS LOCK, this is not a very good way of emphasizing things.

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Very nice looking web site. You need a nice looking logo and your meta tags and title are real bad.
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Old 01-11-2004, 09:31 PM
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Nice design, easy navigation,

Just you use to much !!!!!! and you USE CAPS LOCK, this is not a very good way of emphasizing things.

Good Luck
Thank you very much for your input. I will try to fix the !!! and CAPS Lock Immediately.
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Old 01-11-2004, 09:35 PM
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Very nice looking web site. You need a nice looking logo and your meta tags and title are real bad.
Thank you for your help. I haven't had any luck finding the right logo. Do you have any suggestions? How do I fix my mega tags and title? I'm not sure I know how to do that.
I really appreciated any assistance you have to offer.
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Old 01-11-2004, 11:39 PM
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This is just an idea on the meta tags it was done in about 5 seconds but it is a lot better then what you have now. If you need more help email me and I will see what I can do. There are a lot of web design and logo design people on this forum.

I´m one of them but do not want this to turn into people trying to get some work from you instead of a site review. So it is probley better if you email some people and just get prices for that.

I hope this helps

<html>
<Head>
<TITLE>We sale all types of products gold jewelry, diamond jewelry and more</title>
<META NAME="Description" CONTENT="We sale gold and diamond jewelry,DVD players,Cameras and a lot more">
<META NAME="keywords" CONTENT="Gold Jewelry,Diamond Jewelry,Electronics,DVD players,CD,MP3,Cameras Camcorders,Gameboy,GameCube,Playstation,Video games">
<META NAME="robots" CONTENT="index,follow">
<meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1">
<link rel="stylesheet" href="scripts/style.css" type="text/css">
</head>
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Old 01-12-2004, 01:43 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by janeth
This is just an idea on the meta tags it was done in about 5 seconds but it is a lot better then what you have now. If you need more help email me and I will see what I can do. There are a lot of web design and logo design people on this forum.

I´m one of them but do not want this to turn into people trying to get some work from you instead of a site review. So it is probley better if you email some people and just get prices for that.

I hope this helps

<html>
<Head>
<TITLE>We sale all types of products gold jewelry, diamond jewelry and more</title>
<META NAME="Description" CONTENT="We sale gold and diamond jewelry,DVD players,Cameras and a lot more">
<META NAME="keywords" CONTENT="Gold Jewelry,Diamond Jewelry,Electronics,DVD players,CD,MP3,Cameras Camcorders,Gameboy,GameCube,Playstation,Video games">
<META NAME="robots" CONTENT="index,follow">
<meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=iso-8859-1">
<link rel="stylesheet" href="scripts/style.css" type="text/css">
</head>


Thank you very much and yes it did help. I'll try to correct what I can and then maybe ask for help again. Thank you
Sherry
www.awesomebuys.com
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