Contact Us Forum Rules Search Archive
WebProWorld Part of WebProNews.com
Page One Link To Us Edit Profile Private Messages Archives FAQ RSS Feeds  
 

Go Back   WebProWorld > Site Design > Submit Your Site For Review
Subscribe to the Newsletter FREE!


Register FAQ Members List Calendar Arcade Chatbox Mark Forums Read

Submit Your Site For Review Need a fresh set of eyeballs to take a look at your site? Have a specific issue or question about some aspect of your layout, design or interface? This is the forum for you. When submitting your site, be sure to discuss what aspect you are looking for input on. Just posting a link with the word 'review' isn't appropriate.

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1 (permalink)  
Old 10-22-2005, 03:09 PM
WebProWorld New Member
 

Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Placerville
Posts: 3
mholland66 RepRank 0
Default eldoradosrealestate.com

I am very new at this website promo. Yesterday my site was number nine on yahoo search for placerville real estate and suddenly disappeared. Could you review my site and or give me suggestions on what could have happened?
__________________
Margaret Holland
Coldwell Banker-Allstate Homes Elite
Eldoradosrealestate.com
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 10-23-2005, 04:46 AM
WebProWorld New Member
 

Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Laois, Ireland
Posts: 4
Podge Fitz RepRank 0
Default

Hello there Margaret. I found your site through yahoo.
If I may suggest that you put your phone number and title at the top of each page, it helps customers to feel assured that you won't rip them off.
__________________
www.lifestyle.ie

Irelands Mobile Technology Store
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 10-23-2005, 05:44 AM
WebProWorld Veteran
 

Join Date: Sep 2004
Posts: 812
Paul B RepRank 1
Default

The most important spot on your site is occupied by "Margaret Holland" is that important? Does it say anything about your buiness? In the code it is not in <h1> tags. This would help with SEs.

I have no idea what area you service until the 2nd papagraph or the page title. I would replace you name with <h1>Placerville Real Estate</h1>
<h2>Serving the Placerville, Somerset, Diamond Springs, Shingle Springs, Fairplay, El Dorado, Camino, Pollock Pines and Grizzly Flats</h2>

And define <h1> & <h2> in a stylesheet.
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 10-23-2005, 08:09 PM
WebProWorld Pro
 

Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Florida
Posts: 180
MikeinFlorida RepRank 0
Default Suggestions

Hi: I think you've got a good start for a beginner. But I'd strongly urge you to re-write the home page to start to deliver an outward message. Tell the surfer quickly what you can do for them and why you are the greatest without stating that you are of course.

Also-- place your phone number with this conventional style of a real estate site you have here at or near the top of the page with your name. And get a new picture taken. You are a very good looking lady! Get your hair done and make this site your sales pitch because after all it is!

Good luck!
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 10-23-2005, 11:58 PM
WebProWorld New Member
 

Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Placerville
Posts: 3
mholland66 RepRank 0
Default reviewing my website eldoradosrealestate.com

Thank you Podge, Paul & Mike for reviewing my website. Great suggestions. Little hurt about the photo but thanks anyway.
__________________
Margaret Holland
Coldwell Banker-Allstate Homes Elite
Eldoradosrealestate.com
Reply With Quote
Reply

  WebProWorld > Site Design > Submit Your Site For Review


Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Search Engine Optimization by vBSEO 3.2.0