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Old 01-09-2004, 11:39 PM
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Default www.3dconsultants.net Review...

This site is my new business site. Any comments (or compliments) are appreciated.
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Old 01-10-2004, 12:13 AM
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You have about 5-10 seconds to tell your viewer who you are and what you do... your text on the top of the page is not clear about your services... I had to scroll down to determine what your company does. perhaps you should take the text from the bottom of the page and put it where your visitor can immediately see it.
your links to your clients shoudl be opening on a new window, so your visitor does not leave your site..
on the about us page, I don't think it is necessary to tell the viewer that the co-owners are male... and that one of the owners is qualified because he is a father of five.. that does not indicate his business expertise.
your font is too large... I viewed your site at 800X600 and had to reduce the view text to smallest.. believe it or not, most people don't know about that feature and viewing in 800X600, the font size is overwhelming.
the site looks very good... just needs some minor adjustments...
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Old 01-10-2004, 11:24 AM
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Tested in Mozilla and IE6 56k modem 800x600. Loads reasonably fast. Looks the same in both browsers. A nice design. Good luck with it.

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Old 01-14-2004, 02:57 PM
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Thank you for your critique Info...
I have made a few changes already and I'm in the process of having the content on the main page adjusted. I agree with you about the Father of Five comment. However, the fact that we are male is relevant. The fact that we are young, male enteprenuers is part of the point.
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Old 01-14-2004, 03:57 PM
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Hi,

I viewed your site on a cable modem connection
so it loaded quickly enough.

As far as 5 or 10 seconds to get your message
across... yes you have a short window, but
that "depends". If a viewer went to your site
specifically to see what you have to offer...
you have way more than 5 seconds. But if a viewer
happen to search and find you... that time will be
less unless you "connect" with that viewer's wants.

You have a good Openning line "does your business have
a winning strategy?" A quesion like that does a lot
to capture the viewer's interest.

But... then I'm thinking - "business strategy" for
what? So, I think you need to quickly hone in on
the various things you offer to make a successfull
business strategy.

Near the bottom of your home page you have "Listed
are some of the professional services we at 3D
Solutions For Business, LLC can offer you:" Then you
have some bulleted items. To me it reads .."zzzz".
rewrite it... more direct and "conversational", instead of:
Quote:
Acknowledging your business' need for an
online presence and designing and implementing a web
site that is capable of meeting the need
Use something like:
Quote:
we design an online presence to meet your business needs.
Since you seem to offer a wide variety of services,
you might want to have highlighted paragraph headings
for each service: web presence, marketing, business plan....etc.

~Roland
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